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THE RED CAMP 15

May 13, 2007 by David Gordon

by Debra Diaz

Gloria:

María del Veracruzano

 

It is the middle of the night and Carmen wakes

me up. "Levántate, I need you to drive me to the

cantina."

 

I am furious because ever since I bought my

1964 Mustang with the money I earned working as

a cashier at the Mandarin Kitchen, I’ve become the

family chauffeur.

 

"Jesus Christ, why do we have to go now?" I

ask.

 

"Just get dressed, we have to go. Hurry up!"

I dress, and soon we are driving the few blocks

to the cantina. I don’t ask what this is about,

because I already know. Ever since Dad got out of

the County Farm and started working nights at El

Veracruzano, Carmen’s been acting really weird.

She gets all worked up and then asks me to take her

out looking for Dad. I want to say no, but for some

reason I just can’t.

 

As we approach the bar, we hear music blaring

out the front door. Men drift outside to smoke and

hang out. I park directly in front of the bar, and

Carmen jumps out of the car.

 

"Stay here and lock the doors," she says. She

enters the bar and I lose sight of her in the crowd.

I look around me. The streets are empty. The

men near the entrance stare at me. I want to throw

their looks back at them, but instead I avoid their

gaze.

 

Suddenly I hear a scream, followed by cursing

in both English and Spanish. Men stream out of the

double doors. I see Chueco, the bartender, dragging

a struggling Carmen out the door. She jerks away

from his hold and runs back in. Another scream. I

jump out of the car and into the crowded entrance.

 

"¡Puta, pinche cabrona! I’m going to kill you!" I

hear Carmen shout. I squirm into the doorway and

what I see amazes me.

 

Carmen and the barmaid are on the ground.

Carmen holds the woman’s red bubble wig in one

hand and with the other holds her down by the

throat. She tosses the wig onto the bar and then

grabs the woman’s hair. The barmaid squirms away,

but Carmen chases her through the bar and into the

bathroom. The barmaid locks the door and Carmen

pounds on it.

 

"¡Sal de ahí, puta! Come out now!" she yells.

Dad grabs Carmen and pulls her outside, kicking

and screaming. I see him walk her around the

back of the building, trying to calm her down.

 

My Tío Jessie walks out of the bar and towards

me.

 

"What are you doing here?"

 

"I drove Carmen here."

 

"Come on, get back in the car. I’ll follow you

back home," he says. Carmen continues to curse in

the background.

 

"Okay," I answer, somewhat relieved.

I drive back to the house, and Tío Jessie follows

me to make sure I get in all right. About an hour

and a half later, I hear a car door slam and Carmen

enters the house. I hear the car drive away. I try to

fall asleep.

 

The next morning, Carmen cooks breakfast like

nothing has happened. I look out the window—one

sure way to know if Dad came home or not. The car

is there. But barely. Sitting on its rims, all four tires

are shredded. I wonder if it’s Dad’s recklessness or

Carmen’s anger. Either way, I guess it doesn’t matter.

She found him and they made it home.

 

To read the next chapter of THE RED CAMP, click here…

(THE RED CAMP is reprinted with permission from the publisher of The Red Camp by Debra Diaz (University of Houston – Arte Público Press, 1996) to buy a copy of THE RED CAMP, go to their website at http://www.arte.uh.edu/view_book.aspx?isbn=1558851690)

 

 

 

 

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