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THE RED CAMP 16

May 13, 2007 by David Gordon

by Debra Diaz

 

Emily:

Model Houses

Dad is in construction now and he knows where

all the best model houses are. Sometimes on Sundays

we’ll all pile into the car and drive out past the

groves all the way to Yorba Linda or Irvine to look

at the houses. Because he works on them, Dad has

keys to some of the models and we get to go inside.

They are beautiful. Smelling of fresh paint and

newly cut carpet, they sparkle like diamonds. La

Chiva and I have a routine: before we walk inside,

while we’re standing out on the porch, we close our

eyes and hold our breath—it’s always better that

way. And when we open our eyes, the lights inside

are all soft and glowing, like in your dreams. La

Chiva usually then races up the stairs to the bedrooms

so she can choose hers first. I wander into the

kitchen and imagine smelling arroz con pollo or

hearing the clap-clapping of Mom’s hands when she

makes tortillas. As I walk through the living room, I

see myself coming home from school, putting my

books on the coffee table and curling up on the sofa

to watch TV.

 

The nicer models have shimmering chandeliers

and silk flowers in elegant vases. Sometimes we’ll

find one that has quiet music playing in every room,

like it’s coming from the walls themselves.

 

After Chiva and I choose our bedrooms, we

inspect and assign every room in the house and

then move to the outside. The back yard is usually

just an empty lot filled with dirt, so we pass that by.

The garage and driveway are always bright white

without oil stains or broken-down cars, and I imagine

seeing Dad there, helping Mom on weekends

around the house.

 

In the front yard Rita does cartwheels and

makes huge dents in the new, soft, green grass. I sit

on the curb and look across the street at the empty

houses that stare blankly back at me—lonely and

cold—waiting for someone to move in. Waiting for a

family like ours.

 

Driving home from the models, I am sad. It

would be nice to live in a new house. From the back

seat of the station wagon I watch the sun jump back

and forth like a jack-in-the-box through the tall

rows of eucalyptus trees. As we get closer to the

camp, I see my friends playing out in front of their

small houses. And I feel a little guilty—these houses

aren’t that bad. They just look a little tired, kind of

like they’re ready to sit down and relax after a hard

day at work.

 

(THE RED CAMP is reprinted with permission from the publisher of The Red Camp by Debra Diaz (University of Houston – Arte Público Press, 1996) to buy a copy of THE RED CAMP, go to their website at http://www.arte.uh.edu/view_book.aspx?isbn=1558851690)

 

 

 

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