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THE RED CAMP 17

June 11, 2007 by David Gordon

by Debra Diaz

Rita La Chiva:

Party Time

When I grow up, I’m never acting like they act.

Like Mom and Dad. Like the way they were last

night.

 

It started when Tía Mercy and Tío Gilbert and

Tía Clara and Tío Vicente came over on Sunday to

visit. They sent Emily, Hector, Rubén and me to the

movies. By the time we got back from seeing It’s a

Mad, Mad, Mad World, Vicente Fernández’s voice

was roaring out of the stereo and Tío Gilbert had

already gone out to get more beer.

 

Emily lowered the stereo volume and went into

our room and locked the door, like she always does.

I turned on the TV and found Pillow Talk, one of my

favorite movies. Gloria was still at work, and Hector

and Ruben, knowing better than to stay, had

already walked home. So I stretched out on the

couch and enjoyed the movie.

 

A few minutes later Mom walked into the living

room.

 

"Who turned down the stereo?" she asked.

 

"I don’t know. Emily, I think," I answered, not

taking my eyes off of Doris Day.

 

"Damn her."

 

Mom turned up the stereo volume and walked

back into the kitchen.

 

"Rita, are you hungry?" she asked from the

kitchen.

 

"No, I had a hot dog at the movies."

 

"Did Emily eat?"

 

"I don’t know," I answered, irritated.

 

Mom came back into the living room and sat

down beside me. She smelled like beer and cigarettes.

 

"Rita, go to the dairy and get me a pack of cigarettes."

 

"Mom, no, I don’t want to, ask Dad. I’m watching

a movie, and besides, they won’t let me buy cigarettes."

 

"Okay, be like that," she said. She kissed me

and then clumsily walked out of the room.

I guess I fell asleep after that, because the next

thing I remember is Gloria waking me up and

telling me to go to bed. The voices of my parents and

aunts and uncles were loud. Gloria still had her

white nylon uniform on and smelled like Chinese

food. The sound of shattering glass exploded

through the air, and Gloria and I looked at each

other. She ran out to see what happened. My back

stiffened. Damn them. I pulled the red velvet couch

pillows over my ears and sank down into the couch.

I didn’t want to hear any of it. But Mom’s sobbing,

screeching voice cut through the cushions.

 

"¡Desgraciado, hijo de puta! You don’t care

about me, you don’t care about anyone but yourself."

 

I heard Dad laugh, uncomfortably.

 

"Cálmate, Carmen, it’s okay. You’ll wake up the

girls," Tío Vicente said soothingly.

 

"Just leave her alone, she’s not going to try anything,"

Dad half-joked.

 

"Cállate, Emilio," Tía Mercy warned. "She’s

really mad."

 

I heard another beer bottle breaking, followed

by scuffling. I walked into the hallway and saw

Mom run into the kitchen and pull open the silverware

drawer. She grabbed the largest and sharpest

knife.

 

"You say I’m not going to kill myself. Well, just

watch me. You treat me like shit. You don’t want me

around. Well, you don’t have to worry about me,

cabrón, mentiroso!"

 

Mom raised the knife above her wrist just as

Gloria grabbed her arms from behind. The blade cut

into Gloria’s hand.

 

Gloria screamed.

 

Dad grabbed Mom’s hand and the knife

dropped. Gloria fell to the ground crying, and Tía

Mercy started screaming at my Dad.

 

"My sister, my sister, you’re killing my sister!"

 

Tía Mercy punched Dad. Tío Vicente came in to

pull her away. Tía Clara watched all of this from the

doorway, shaking her head.

 

Dad took Mom, still screaming, into their bedroom.

Gloria walked, hunched over, to the sink. I

helped her rinse the blood off. A surprised Tío

Gilbert stepped into the kitchen with two six-packs

and took in the mess.

 

"Carmen’s crazy," he whispered.

 

"No, she just had too much to drink," said

Vicente. "We’ve all had too much to drink."

 

Dad came out of the bedroom.

 

"Gloria, are you okay?"

 

"Yeah, but it’s still bleeding a little."

 

Dad looked at the cut. "I don’t think you need

stitches."

 

I looked at Dad and then at Gloria. "Why do

you guys always do this!" I shouted. They all stared

at me like I was the crazy one. "This stuff always

happens," I shrieked. "You’re all idiots!"

 

I ran out of the kitchen and into the bedroom,

locking the door. I put my Aretha Franklin album

on as loud as I could. I listened for a few seconds,

breathing deeply, trying to catch my breath. It

didn’t work. I slid the window open, pushed out the

screen and pulled myself up and out. I had to get

out.

 

 

(THE RED CAMP is reprinted with permission from the publisher of The Red Camp by Debra Diaz (University of Houston – Arte Público Press, 1996) to buy a copy of THE RED CAMP, go to their website at http://www.arte.uh.edu/view_book.aspx?isbn=1558851690)

 

 

 

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