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THE RED CAMP 20

September 11, 2007 by David Gordon

by Debra Diaz

 

Emily:

Give and Take

"Egg salad, again!" I moan as I remove the

mushy, warm sandwich from its plastic baggy. Egg

salad sandwich, potato chips, an apple and a Ding

Dong. The same lunch every day. Janine checks out

my lunch as she thoughtfully chews her bologna,

Frito and mayonnaise sandwich.

 

"Where’s Stacey?" I ask.

 

"In the cafeteria," Janine answers with mouth

half-full. "I’ll take the Ding Dong if you don’t want

it."

 

Janine, Stacey and I are nerds. I think that’s

why we’ve remained best friends for so long. Stacey,

who is tall, skinny and flatchested, wears a mouthful

of braces, and is tough and hardheaded. Sweet,

naive Janine is petite and curvy, has long, dishwater-

blonde hair that never seems to be washed often

enough, and wears glittery blue cat’s-eye glasses

that sit halfway down her nose. I’m tall and skinny

like Stacey and so backwardly shy that I don’t think

I’ve spoken up once in class this year. I think it is

our sympathy for each other that keeps us together.

 

"I hate those guys," Stacey whispers from

behind us as she slips her thin legs through the

metal table bench and plunks her lunch tray down

on the table. We follow her gaze to a nearby table

where Cheryl Mann, Marla Madigan, and the rest

of the pep-squad bunch gather for lunch.

 

"Well, you’re not alone," I answer.

 

"But they’re really nice. . .most of the time," Ja –

nine says in their defense.

 

"Yeah, most of the time," I sarcastically answer.

Stacey digs into her spaghetti and I watch her

gaze wander back to the nearby table.

 

"Stacey. Stacey!" I shout.

 

"What!" she snaps as she turns sharply toward

me.

 

"Why are you paying attention to them? You

don’t even like them!"

 

"I’m just watching! Just leave me alone, okay?"

I look at Janine, who shrugs her shoulders. I

pull out the second half of my sandwich.

 

"Hi."

 

Looking up from my lunch sack, I see a tall varsity-

jacketed Jeff Hauser towering above me.

 

"Hello," I answer.

 

"So I hear you’re in the Honor Club?" he asks.

 

"Yeah, so what?" I answer nervously.

"What else are you in?"

 

"Why do you want to know?" I ask.

 

"I just want to know if you’d like to run for student

body president, because I’d like to be your campaign

manager."

 

"Me?"

 

"Yeah."

 

"Why?"

 

"Well, I know I don’t know you that well, but I

like you and I hear you’re really smart and are

involved in a lot of things like the yearbook and

sports. Stuff like that. And I think you’d make a

good president."

 

I glance at Stacey, who looks skeptical. Janine

sits wide-eyed and open-mouthed.

 

"Hmmm,. . ." I answer. "I think I have to think

about it."

 

"Okay. Well, let me know tomorrow, okay?"

 

"Okay."

 

Jeff joins his basketball friends, and together

they walk away in a pack towards the cafeteria. I

reach into my sack, pull out the Ding Dong, carefully

unwrap the foil cover and sink my teeth into the

spongy chocolate cake.

 

"What are you going to do?" asks Stacey.

 

"What do you think I should do?" I say faintly.

 

"I think you should do it. He wants to help you,"

Janine chirps.

 

"Yeah, but why does he want to help me?"

 

"There’s something disgusting about him,"

Stacey comments.

 

"I think he’s cute," says Janine.

 

"On the other hand, there’s a lot of things you

could do as president," adds Stacey.

 

"Like what?"

 

"Shorten the cafeteria line. Let girls wear pants

to school. . ."

 

Janine cuts in, "Get better equipment for the

girls hockey team, abolish P.E. showers. . . ."

 

I jump in, "Longer lunch periods, shorter classes

and make cheerleading illegal!"

 

Janine, Stacey and I explode in laughter.

 

"Well, at least I could try, right?"

 

"Right," they answer.

 

 

"Mom."

 

"Yes."

 

"What do you think of me running for president

of Lincoln Junior High School."

 

"M’ija, I think you should do anything you want

to do."

 

"No, Mom," I say exasperatingly. "I’m asking if

you think it will be a good idea for me to do it."

 

"If that’s what you want to do."

 

That’s not what I want to hear, but that’s the

way Mom is. It’s always "Whatever makes you

happy m’ija." I want her to tell me, yes, do it, it will

be good for you, or, NO, don’t do it, it’s a big mistake.

I want someone to tell me what to do. I get

tired of making all the decisions.

When I ask my sisters for advice, Gloria says do

it, Rita warns me to stop bothering her, and Laura

says I should run for cheerleader instead. I don’t

ask Dad.

 

I decide to run. I say yes to Jeff, and immediately

he’s making plans.

 

"We have one week to campaign, then next

Monday we give our speeches and later that day we

vote. On Tuesday, you’ll be president. We need to

start now. We need posters, banners, handbills, rallies.

. ."

 

I beg Mom for money to buy art supplies.

Together Stacey, Janine and I create ten posters,

three ten-foot butcher-paper banners and one hundred

mimeographed handbills. During breaks and

lunch periods, Jeff stands on a table in the lunch

plaza and gives speeches praising my qualifications

and promising I’ll make a great president. He’s cute

and funny and everybody loves him. He’s so good he

sells me on myself. Still, every now and then I wonder

why he’s doing this.

 

Monday arrives and I am terrified. The students

fill the amphitheater. Jeff gives a funny introductory

speech and then it’s my turn. I stand and

nervously read my short speech from carefully written

index cards. And then it is over. The students go

wild and give both of us a standing ovation. I return

to my seat and collapse against Janine and Stacey.

They tell me I did good. Somehow, something

doesn’t feel right.

 

The following morning, during homeroom, the

winners are announced. I am named president.

 

At break I track down Ellen Hauser, Jeff ’s

younger sister and a friend of mine from elementary

school. I find her out near the back of the school,

sneaking a cigarette with her girlfriends.

 

"Hi, can I talk to you for a second?" I ask her.

 

"Sure, hey, congratulations on winning."

 

"Thanks," I say quickly. Ellen has always been

nice to me. With her pudgy body and too-loud laugh,

she is kind of an outcast herself.

 

We walk away from the group and I blurt out,

"Ellen, why did Jeff help me win?"

 

"What do you mean? He was your campaign

manager; he wanted you to win," she answers.

 

"No! Why did he ask me to run, why did he

want me to win?"

 

"That’s a stupid question. Didn’t you want to

win?"

 

"Yeah, but . . . I mean, he didn’t even know me.

And I’m not really a part of that crowd, you know."

I look at her and I remember the chubby first

grader who was out half the school year with pneumonia.

She never really seemed to catch up after

that.

 

"Please, Ellen," I plead, "you know what I

mean."

 

She looks down at her unlaced sneaker and

gives in.

 

"Well, I don’t know why, but Jeff really hates

this school and he wanted to mess with it and leave

it in bad shape. Electing a Mexican girl president

was one way of doing it. But you know, I don’t know,

it seems like he kind of got to like you, and after

that he campaigned because he wanted to. Jeff likes

to win. I don’t know, he’s my brother, but he can be

kind of a jerk sometimes."

 

I run out into the baseball field, feeling

ashamed and angry and stupid. I hate him. I stop in

the middle of center field and sit down and cry. How

can I face them? I’m a joke. My mind races. Maybe I

can quit. Or maybe I’ll transfer out. I lie on the cool

grass and close my eyes wishing I could disappear

and never see any of these people again. Instead I

see the whole amphitheatre in front of me, filled

with laughing and jeering faces. In the distance, I

hear the the first bell ring and I will my body to

leave, float up into the air and fly far away. Feeling

lighter and lighter, I open my eyes and see below me

the playing fields and the tops of the school buildings.

Then the tardy bell rings, loud and shrill, and

I’m down on the field again. Wiping my eyes with

the back of my hand, I shake the grass off my dress

and reluctantly head back towards class. As I walk

down the hallway, students warmly congratulate me

and suddenly it hits me—it doesn’t really matter.

Jeff will graduate in two weeks and be gone forever.

People voted for me and I won. I guess we both got

what we wanted. I was not only going to be president,

I was going to be a good one.

 

(THE RED CAMP is reprinted with permission from the publisher of The Red Camp by Debra Diaz (University of Houston – Arte Público Press, 1996) to buy a copy of THE RED CAMP, go to their website at http://www.arte.uh.edu/view_book.aspx?isbn=1558851690)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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