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THE RED CAMP 21

October 9, 2007 by David Gordon

by Debra Diaz

Rita La Chiva:

Light My Fire

I really, really, really hate it here. Especially

now, in August. It’s boring enough during the rest of

the year, but in August this town becomes hell. It’s

so hot, even the tiles give up and slide right off the

roofs.

No way I’m waiting. Before Mom left she told

Emily, Laura and me to wait here for Dad and he’d

take us to the Corn Festival. "He went to Tío

Manny’s and he’ll be back in an hour," she said.

Yeah, and like I still believe in Santa Claus. If he’s

not here by three o’clock, I’m leaving. I’ll walk to the

Corn Festival by myself. It’s only a couple of miles.

I’m almost fourteen, anyway. I shouldn’t have to be

going anywhere with my parents or my stupid little

sisters.

It’s three o’clock and I tell Gloria that I’m going

over to my friend Theresa’s house. Gloria warns me

that if I go to Theresa’s, I won’t be able to go with

the others to the festival. I can’t believe she really

believes they’re going. She’s so stupid. Sometimes

she acts just like Mom, or maybe it’s that she wants

to get rid of us so she can spend time with her

boyfriend. Emily and Laura look up from their game

of Fish as I walk through the living room and out

the front door.

"We’ll bring you back a present from the Festival,"

Laura says, hoping I’ll change my mind about

going with them.

"No, that’s okay," I answer guiltily, knowing

that I will definitely go and their chances are slim

at best. I run out the door, jump off the porch steps

and into the street.

I run a block and then walk a block. The sweat

drips off my face and neck, running down my chest

and drenching my T-shirt. Damn. I’m going to look

horrible when I get there. I have on my new sleeveless,

cropped, white-ribbed T-shirt with my blue

bell-bottom jeans from Jeans West, because even

though I’m meeting Theresa at the festival, I’m really

going to see Jess. Jess Vargas is a junior whom

I’ve had a crush on all year. He goes to La Vista

High School and lives two blocks away from us,

near the railroad tracks. I’ll just have to sneak into

a bathroom somewhere and clean up. Run, then

walk. Walk, run. I pass El Rey Bakery, Foster’s

Freeze, Ray’s Auto with the monkey mechanics on

the billboard, and finally the library, which sits

right before the park.

Theresa sits on the curb corner eating a buttered

corn on the cob.

"Why do these idiots call it the Corn Festival?

They don’t grow corn here. It should be the orange

or lemon or even the avocado festival."

"I don’t know," I answer. "How long have you

been waiting?"

"Forever. I thought your Dad was driving you

here."

"No, I walked."

Theresa tosses her cob into the gutter, stands

up and straightens her short denim skirt around

her muscular brown thighs, then readjusts her halter

top over her bulging cleavage.

"Come on, I saw Jess and his friends over past

the game lines. He’s been waiting for you."

At the mention of Jess’s name, I reach for the

Saint Christopher medal hanging from a chain

around my neck. Jess gave it to me last week while

we were eating taquitos at the Foster Freeze. When

he asked me to go steady, I wasn’t sure what to say,

so I told him I needed to think about it first before

giving him an answer. But I took the medal anyway,

because I like the heavy chain and the feel of the

cool silver disc on my skin.

Jess and I haven’t really done anything. We

haven’t held hands, kissed or even really talked that

much. I guess this is kind of like our first date

I follow Theresa through the game area, where

guys try landing shiny dimes onto smooth flat

plates or struggle to toss white featherweight plastic

balls into tiny fishbowls, all in the hopes of winning

a lime-green teddy bear or a tiny, scared

goldfish. We push our way through the cotton candy,

corn dog and burger lines, and finally reach the picnic

area.

"Rita!"

I turn towards the voice and see Jess peering

out from a group of bushes. We walk through an

opening in the bushes and find ourselves in a small,

private clearing surrounded by trees. Jess and his

two friends, Rudy and Anthony, stand in the center

of the clearing, drinking from a small bottle. Jess

hands it to me.

"Tequila," he says. "Have some, it’s great."

I look at Theresa, but she’s already busy drinking

from a beer can, so I take the amber bottle from

Jess and drink. A slow, strong warmth slides down

my throat. I pause, catch my breath and take another

drink. In the distance, a battle of the bands plays

"Light My Fire." I like this.

Jess and I wander through the crowds, holding

hands. We get on the ferris wheel and soar over the

park. The sun is setting and the festival neon lights

flicker on. Our basket stops at the top of the wheel

and Jess and I sit there gently swinging back and

forth in the warm breeze. I don’t ever want to come

down.

"Rita. . .Rita!"

From the ground I look up into the air, following

Theresa’s voice.

"There," Jess points, "she’s on the Octopus."

Theresa leans out of an Octopus arm and

points.

"What’s she pointing at?" Jess asks.

"I don’t know."

I follow the line of her arm. "Maybe she wants

us to meet her at the half-apples. That’s where she’s

pointing."

We slowly make our way through the crowd to

the half-apple line. I stop abruptly.

"What?" Jess asks.

A few yards away I see Dad, with a paper bag in

his hand, helping a vomiting Emily and a scream ing

Laura off the half-apple. Laura clutches a half-eaten

corn dog while Emily holds what looks like a bag of

peanuts to her chest. Gloria comes out from behind

the safety fence to help Dad. I can’t believe he fed

them before getting on the rides! I pull my hand out

of Jess’s and run away into the crowd. Jess calls out

after me, but I keep running. I hide behind the

House of Horror.

"What’s wrong with you, why’d you run away?"

Jess asks minutes later as he catches up with me.

"My Dad. I don’t want him to see me."

"Why not?"

"Because I’m not supposed to be here alone," I

answer rudely.

"Are you going to get in trouble?"

"I don’t know," I snap. I’m mad at them all: at

Jess for asking stupid questions; at Gloria for giving

in to Dad and coming here; and at Dad for carrying

that paper bag.

"I don’t know if I’m getting in trouble, and I

really don’t give a shit."

Jess stares at me, confused for a second, then

shakes his head and slowly smiles. "You’re something

else."

Behind us "Light My Fire" wins another ap –

plause battle, and the organ intro starts up again.

Jess pulls out the tequila bottle and I grab it from

him, gulp quickly, then take his hand and lead him

away from the festival and into the street.

 

(THE RED CAMP is reprinted with permission from the publisher of The Red Camp by Debra Diaz (University of Houston – Arte Público Press, 1996) to buy a copy of THE RED CAMP, go to their website at http://www.arte.uh.edu/view_book.aspx?isbn=1558851690)

 

 

 

 

 

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