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THE RED CAMP 23

December 7, 2007 by David Gordon

by Debra Diaz

 

LA MADRE:  The Mother

Carmen:  Destiny

 

I watch Emilio Reyes Cruz, in his freshly

starched and pressed army uniform, move down the

street like an alley cat with his head lowered, eyes

staring straight ahead and his long legs gliding real

smooth underneath him. Heading towards his

father’s house in El Campo Colorado, he crosses 4th

Street and glances up at me on the steps of my Tía

Julia’s porch. I pull my skirt up just a little bit, slowly

moved my legs from underneath me and stretch

them out full-length in the warm sun. He smiles.

 

I always dream the beginning the way it really

happened. The way we met. It’s the ending I dream

differently, sometimes better, most times worse. The

dreams with happier endings, where Emilio and I

stay together, leave me feeling depressed and

angry—for being such a pendeja and for still having

hope when everyone knows your destiny is your destiny

and you can’t escape it.

 

I’m tired. For months now, I’ve been keeping

watch. Making sure they don’t get too close. But

they’re smart. They followed us when we moved

from the house to the apartment and sometimes

they’ve even knocked on the front door, pretending

they’re the apartment manager or the Avon Lady or

even schoolkids selling candy. But I’m good at

watching. I stay up day and night, keeping them

away. Watching and thinking.

 

"Ay, m’ija, stay away from that one. He’s got girlfriends

all over the place." Tía Julia stops sorting

the beans and looks me straight in the eye. "I see you

watching him. Better not let Clara find out. She

can’t stand the sight of him."

"¿Y por qué no?"

"He’s wild, he’s trouble and he’s a Cruz. Clara

thinks the whole family is stuck-up. And on top of all

that, I just heard he got kicked out of the Army. If I

were you m’ijita, I’d forget about him."

 

I think a lot about the past. People and places

that are gone. Like the flower fields I worked in

when I was a girl or my father’s shotgun house in

Colton. I think about death, too. Mostly my own.

The doctor Rita takes me to wants me to see another

doctor about the voices. But I tell him, hell no,

I’m not crazy, I don’t need that kind of help.

 

"Are you ready?" Clara yells from the hallway.

I look at myself in the mirror. I’m looking good.

Low-cut red V-neck sweater, tight black ankle-slit

skirt, suede platform shoes and ruby-red lipstick. ¡Ay

que chula! Emilio and I made a plan last week to

meet tonight at the Harmony Ballroom Halloween

Festival. I thought today would never come.

"Almost."

Clara enters the small bedroom and her eyeliner-

perfect eyes widen.

"¡Carmen, pareces una puta! You look like a

whore! Can you even breathe in that?" she asks.

"I’m not changing," I announce, glaring back at

her.

"Sin vergüenza," she utters as she shakes her

head. "You have no shame. At least wipe off some of

that lipstick. And hurry up, Vicente is waiting in the

car."

 

The ballroom is beautiful: Red and gold streamers

unfurl from the ceiling like silky corkscrew curls

while people in their Saturday-night best slowly fill

the hall. A large band performs on a spacious stage,

and in the far corner a bar serves soft drinks and

beer. I scan the faces and most everyone is from La

Vista or Fullerton. I see La Coqueta Linda Velásquez

in her padded push-up bra flirting with the newly

married Ernesto Gómez. La Gordita Ginny Luna

and her two skinny sisters anxiously eye the men

across the room, hoping they’ll be asked to dance.

Out on the dance floor Chueco and my cousin Esther

shout insults at each other as a small group of men

egg them on. Most of the guys, including Emilio’s

four brothers, stand together near the exit, drinking

beer, listening to the music and watching the crowd.

I spot Emilio in a dark corner, surrounded by a

group of girls. Leaning back against the wall, I place

my hand on my hip, strike what I think is a sexy

pose and wait for him to notice me. He doesn’t. I shift

my hips. Still no response. Frustrated, I finally walk

over to him.

 

Emilio beams as I approach him. Bending to

kiss my cheek, he whispers in my ear, "¡Ay, mi vida!

¿Por qué te quiero tanto?"

 

I smile sweetly and narrow my eyes. Glancing

quickly at each other, the other girls quietly move

away. We’re alone. His lips brush my face and he

whispers in my ear again. I know I can’t believe a

word he says. But it is nice to hear.

 

Across the room I catch Clara watching us.

Strains of "Moonlight Serenade" fill the ballroom as

she makes her way towards us. I grab Emilio’s arm

and pull him onto the dance floor. Emilio grins as he

watches Clara disappear into the crowd.

 

"So I heard you quit the Army?" I ask.

 

Emilio’s eyes crinkle as he chuckles, "And who

told you that?"

 

"My Tía Julia."

 

"Well, Tía Julia’s wrong. You can’t quit the

Army; I went AWOL."

 

"Why?"

 

"I didn’t like it," he answers seriously.

 

"And what didn’t you like?"

 

"We were treated like slaves. Worse than in the

fields. And besides. . ." He smiles. "I missed you."

 

"¡Ni me conoces! Maybe it was someone else you

were thinking of," I sharply answer.

 

He playfully kisses my neck, and I think if the

Army is worse than the fields, then I don’t blame

him for leaving. Emilio’s worked the fields since he

was six-years old. He hates them more than I do.

The song ends and Emilio gently presses his

body against mine. ¡Que mal hombre! Tía Julia was

right, what a ladies’ man.

 

"Let’s leave," he whispers.

 

Emilio pulls me out the door, through the crowd

outside and into the parking lot. We stop at a dark

blue Chevy, and he pushes me up against the door

and kisses me. Soft, slow and deep.

 

"Oye, cabrón," I whisper as I push him away. "I

have to get back. Clara saw us."

 

"Come on, let’s go for a ride."

 

"I can’t."

 

"Ay, mi amor, vamos no más por una hamburguesita."

 

"I’m not hungry."

 

"Mentirosa. I don’t believe you," he softly utters.

He looks at me, smiles, and his hands, deep golden

brown and heavily calloused, slowly button my

sweater. I close my eyes and he softly kisses each eyelid.

 

"All right," I sigh quickly, "let’s go."

 

We get in, he starts the engine, and the Chevy

races out of the parking lot.

 

The frayed living room curtains flutter and I

snap awake. The smell of blood fills the apartment.

Heavy breathing. There are so many of them. They

exhaust me. I reach for the knife under the sofa

cushions and listen. They’re whispering about me. I

shout at them to stop and, grabbing the knife, I run

to the front door, throw it open, and scream

"¡Cabrones, no me van a agarrar!" Neighbors peek

out their windows, too afraid to open their doors. I

slam the door shut and pray to God to help me.

 

We speed through Anaheim and Fullerton

towards the camp. The night sky is blue-black.

 

"I thought we were getting something to eat."

 

"Pues, I guess I changed my mind. Nothing

seems to be open, anyway," Emilio answers.

 

Looking across at him, I wonder if he’s telling

the truth.

 

"So then where are we going?" I ask.

 

I tell Rita to drive me to East Los Angeles, to

the flat part right before the hills. My cousin Lupe

gave me the address of a woman who will help me,

una curandera. When Rita and I walk into the

small living room filled with waiting patients, they

move aside and make way for me to walk through.

La Curandera peeks her tiny, shriveled face through

the doorway of the bedroom, looks at me and waves

me into the room. She hands me a towel and tells

me to take off my clothes and lay down on a small

bed. I do as she says. Her strong hands rub my body

with an ointment that smells like mint and rose

petals and I feel my muscles relax. I want to cry. I

ask her what is wrong with me but she doesn’t

answer. Instead she prays and takes an egg, a

tomato, and a lemon and rolls each over my body.

 

"Alguien la quiere ver viejita," she finally says

to me. "Someone wants you to be an old woman."

 

"¿Quién? I ask.

 

"Alguien."

 

Who? Who would want to hurt me? And then I

think of the Mexican woman Emilio is seeing.

 

Emilio turns left onto Buena Vista, crosses the

railroad tracks and enters El Campo. The tiny

barrio is asleep. We drive up a pot-holed dirt road to

one of the small wooden houses.

 

"I’ll be right back," he whispers, jumping out of

the car.

 

He runs up the dirt path, leaps onto the wooden

porch and reaches for the door. The door opens suddenly

from the inside and Emilio faces his father,

Don Antero, who stares first at Emilio and then out

at me in the car.

 

I hear arguing in Spanish. Don Antero sounds

furious. Emilio abruptly turns and walks back to the

car.

 

"What happened?" I ask as he opens the door.

 

"He won’t let us stay here."

 

"You asked him if we could stay here? I can’t

believe you! Take me home, now!"

 

Emilio slides into the driver’s seat and turns to

me.

 

"Carmen, let’s go to Yuma. To get married."

 

"Married? ¿Estás loco or what? Is this a joke?" I

ask.

 

No reply. He stares at me, waiting for my

response.

 

I turn away and look out the window. What is

he saying? Does he know what he’s doing?

I look back at Emilio. I see the high Indian

cheekbones, the green, taunting cat’s eyes. Who is

this man I think I’m in love with but whom I know

little about, other than he likes to drink and he likes

women? I get embarrassed and look away. Closing

my eyes, I try to think it all out, but instead I feel the

springs in my Tía’s lumpy sofa, the hot sun of the

flower fields, the slap of my father’s hand. And the

need and desire in Emilio’s eyes.

 

"Okay. . .vamos," I say. He starts the engine, and

we head towards Yuma.

 

When she is finished, La Curandera hands me

the lemon, egg and tomato in a crumpled paper bag

and tells me to throw it away as far as I can. I don’t

know if this means as far as I can throw or far away

from where I live, so I decide to throw it in the trash

bin of the market we stop in before we leave East

Los Angeles. I heave the bag with all my strength

and then get back into the car, where Rita stares at

me with a face filled with fear and worry. She thinks

I’m out of my mind.

 

"Vamos," I say, "let’s go home."

She starts the engine and we head back.

 

 

(THE RED CAMP is reprinted with permission from the publisher of The Red Camp by Debra Diaz (University of Houston – Arte Público Press, 1996) to buy a copy of THE RED CAMP, go to their website at http://www.arte.uh.edu/view_book.aspx?isbn=1558851690)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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